vswpaper's Diaryland Diary ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Tidying up At last all the quotes and the bibliography are put right, and the passage corrected where I said the only male artist we see is Augustus Carmichael and then ended the paragraph talking of Orlando's attempts at writing. Now Orlando's set aside at the start, and the paragraph ends better as a bonus. So I'm just waiting for my other friend's feedback so I expect I shall press her for it tomorrow. 12:52 a.m. - 2007-03-14 ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- |
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