vswpaper's Diaryland Diary ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Inching ahead Not a big leap forward today, but I got done what I wanted to. I finished the susceptibility part, which is the close of the feminine attributes part. Next is linking susceptibility to story-making, which may take some doing. It'll be back to the style of the first part (the more difficult) where I felt I was keeping thwo or three threads going through the paragraph, holding some things suspended and allowing them to be self-evident; instead of the more prosaic listing of examples that I complained about yesterday. But in any case I did about a quarter-page today, pretty good for a day I had to work. It will get me onto page 11 by Saturday if I can keep it up. 10:35 p.m. - 2007-02-20 ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- |
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